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love poem written by a very special friend

maya21_75
By: maya21
Mood: don't know
Date: 10/08/2008 03:16:15
Music: Nupur


I stare at her with eyes never closing.

Every move so perfect, as if she were posing.

With each word my love I'm enclosing.

I am now a prisoner of my own desire.



I feel my heart as it's quickly beating.

Is this the angel that my life has been needing?

This action, this thought, always repeating.

But for now I'll just stand and admire.



I love the way she moves, the way she dances.

I love her passionate stares and simple glances.

This love is stronger than all past romances

As I stand there with lustful eyes gleaming.



All my thoughts of other girls go assunder.

The beating of my heart now crashes like thunder.

Is she real, I ask and wonder,

Or am I a man forever dreaming?







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From: maya21
10/16/2008 08:49:19
thank you :) u gotta be lucky to fall in love like that..and have that love forever


From: emon18
10/10/2008 17:42:27
hey....really nice poem...ur frend must love this person alot!


From: maya21
10/10/2008 15:46:22
thanks guys, my friend will be happy to know that.  Yeah, that's exactly how pple sound when theyr in love =)


From: hm_palash
10/10/2008 14:32:45
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From: Ek_Ajnabee
10/08/2008 22:58:13
u're friend is in love...and he is an awesome writer.




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